I need...
I need is a new love,
Someone to inspire me.
To share and make good times with,
Oh God can you see me from above?
Can you send me someone who with me, happiness will be?
Or is Love just not real, like an ancient myth?
God can you at least forgive?
Can you take away my pain?
What is this life I must live?
With all loss and no gain?
Can I forgive myself?
In all the misery I have caused?
Into my despair I delve,
And see all my joy lost.
Yet there is hope,
All I need is someone to crave,
Some to help me cope,
Someone who in me can save,
Save me from my mind,
Who came for who I am,
A soul who is gentle and kind,
Or is my hope just a sham?
posted by Poetic_bum at 11:23 a.m.
3 Comments:
Life is tooo short to wallow in self pity - The idea of love seems to mean the most when you're not "in love" at the moment. platah hatah I think has it right on. There is a certain amount of joy in "suffering";it is almost self indulgent to spend an inordinate amount of time anylyzing it when you ought to be out enjoying life; moving on, finding new experiences. Being "in love" is not the only way to self fulfillment. Move on. You seem worthy of much more.
Don't worry Playah, I am not suffering anymore... other then perhaps from lack of sleep. I wrote this a while ago. Though I don't easily forgive what I did. But I'm not suffering. I posted this, in hopes that someone likes it. I am glad to hear that you did.
And thanks you for your imput too wanda. I am moving on. And I appologize to all those who have read this poem and think that I am still tearing myself appart. I wrote this closer to the time of my mistake. I am actualy enjoying myself most of the time.
I am not so sure if I do. What do you mean by validation?
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