Search for a soul
I search for a soul,
A soul to share with for all of time.
For I have no soul; a soul's shard,
And so I search for another to make me whole.
For someone to by my muse,
And for me to be her bard.
I long to touch her skin,
To taste her lips,
To sleep in with her until noon,
And all the while play with her hair,
And she must allow me to be her stud,
For she will forever be my mare.
ok.. so does anyone have any suggestions for the last two lines... i can't seem to think of anything.
A soul to share with for all of time.
For I have no soul; a soul's shard,
And so I search for another to make me whole.
For someone to by my muse,
And for me to be her bard.
I long to touch her skin,
To taste her lips,
To sleep in with her until noon,
And all the while play with her hair,
And she must allow me to be her stud,
For she will forever be my mare.
ok.. so does anyone have any suggestions for the last two lines... i can't seem to think of anything.
posted by Poetic_bum at 8:29 p.m.
2 Comments:
Are you wanting to change the last two lines? or add two more?
Change the last two... unless people think that they actualy fit... I really don't know... i kinda feel they don't.
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