Saturday, June 07, 2008

gray With a Tan

gray With a Tan is the only color for me,
Simply I am a fan, and I always going to be,
The first man to drop down for her on a knee.
Gray is complex color of a twisted feeling,
It brings out my insincerities that I have been wheeling,
It kills me to see what it is I have been doing.
gray With a Tan is where I want to be.

Tan is a shade that adds to me flavor.
It's like a blade that cuts my fever.
Oh I would run a country just to see her.
Tan is a color that to me brings,
A sense of what’s more then just a two rings,
It builds and breaks and whispers things,
Like gray With a Tan is where I should to be.


(Ok. So this poem sucks. Ya I know it. But I felt like i should write so i did. My appologies to those who actually read it.)

8 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

i wouldn't give it up so easily... but what is "gray With a Tan"? hints please!? -playah

11:31 a.m.  
Blogger Poetic_bum said...

Oh i won't give up yet. Gray with a tan is beautiful, always happy, greets me with warmth everytime i see her. Good enough?

3:57 a.m.  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

my first thought (from your previous posts) is some kind of bottle of beer.... but i will be hopeful and suggest it's a certain dark skinned ms. gray

7:54 p.m.  
Blogger Poetic_bum said...

LOL. Kinda. Her skin isn't that dark, but that actually suprises me. How are you? How come when i tried to visit your blog a while back it said i couldn't.:(.... it said i needed something....

8:34 p.m.  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

(oh it's not mine anymore... i deleted mine a while ago.. i guess someone else is using the name...) so whatever her skin, i am happy for you :-D i hope this is as soulful an experience as you deserve !

6:14 p.m.  
Blogger Poetic_bum said...

Oh i fear it is what i deserve. But not what i want. What i want is not to hurt anyone, and instead to bring joy. But it seems at times that what i deserve is to hurt and be hurt in turn. LOL! Perhaps i am being mellow dramatic as always. In that case: another glass of wine is in order!

5:36 p.m.  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

no one desevers to be hurt. Everyone has regerts let go of it. And try your best to be happy with this girl and learn from your mistakes....aka open up to this girl and spend every waking moment trying to make her happy

8:59 p.m.  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

This is great info to know.

1:23 a.m.  

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